getting to school writing

one day me and my brother had to go to school but we had to go on a boat and my dad had to come because he had to push us but some thing move thing the sea so i told my to  jump  dad to get in the boat and my dad to jump in the boat and we paddled so fast but the thing in the sea but we stop but want to a snack we  got from the boat and we jumped off the boat and we swam and my dad died and it was me and my brother and we survived.